Could you take a look at my manuscript and give me some pointers on improving it and maybe show it to your agent?

First of all, congratulations! That is a terrific achievement. I, of all people, know how much hard work went into the process.

I wish I could take a look at it but unfortunately, I have a very strict policy against reading unpublished manuscripts, for my own protection on the advice of my attorneys.

I can, however, recommend several reputable former New York editors I know who now run consulting businesses. They are professionals whom you can hire to read and critique and/or edit your work. I highly recommend going this route if you're serious about publishing.

Another valuable resource, no matter where you live or what kind of fiction you are writing, is the national organization Romance Writers of America. http://www.rwanational.org They provide a wealth of information for aspiring authors, along with great networking opportunities at various regional and national conferences that draw New York editors in search of new talent. I used to be an editor myself and I acquired a number of authors through RWA conferences. Editors know that RWA members are well-educated on the publishing industry and that they mean business!

Good luck launching your writing career. I'm living proof that your dream can come true.